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Again, before I critique, I want to comment on how well you capture the faces here.

Vision - This has a very nice word of wisdom to the panel that really hits home. You have the worry in the bunnies, and concentration on the fox. The ears here on the adult of worry, and the curious eagerness the young fellow show that you gave the focus of this image very well for the nature of splitting the focus between both. The branch here helps you transition from fox to rabbit, or vice versa.

Originality - This is a very good take on a nice word of wisdom, and you give it a lovely spin in the spirit of briar rabbit.

Technique - I look more than ever to the world around, and I am not disappointed in the least. Everything about this screams a forest Life, flora, fauna, the little nuances of both the fox and bunnies. I see no art dead zones that detract in this work. Nothing is the same for a forest, but showing life in such a place.

Impact - Its more a perspective irk, but where the fox is here for the tree and his puppetry has the minor why I give it four stars over four and a half. I know what you intended for in the hiding around the corner, yet it does distract enough to draw you out of it just very slightly.

But you have done a wonderful image here. And I keep looking forward to these.
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Stasushka Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016  Professional General Artist
Thank you very much for the critique!
Your words really encourage to develop my skills and draw more. Thank you for pointing out the weak points in a very light and polite manner I really appreciate it.
It shows me what to look for more carefully next time. Thanks again! :hug:
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DrunkenDragonDirge Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016
You are very welcome, and I hope you have a great day. May your muse always inspire.
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